Not bad.
Do not think this a site that prizes beauty over functionality so do not worry about aesthetics here. M$PC shots (unless its an extreme cooling rig) are not going to get you high regards lol (only saying this because you seem, well, almost embarrassed in your presentation)
(For tight (not ghetto) modern rigs...Supes and Nip.. there shit is tight and great for benching not a simple combo and still nothing your going to see on headlines somewhere, except for snappies on a hwbot record
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What pump you running? Modern systems a single BIX rad is loud and not effective (stuff throws too much heat) New pump might not be necessary except as a backup
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What is that on your res? Looks like epson ink jet stickers on it lol
Get a loose fan coling your VGA and dunno about the case, since it looks like 2 different ones (notice HDD cages... on is 90 degrees which is a newer sata feature (4-5 years) other is old schoold and you removed the hdd cage and put a single drive in the 3.5" external)